Sherry ([info]sherrymarie) wrote in [info]onepieceyaoi100,
2005-07-14 17:01:00
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Ace: Man-Whore at Large

Title: Close to Perfection
Rating: NC-17ish? I'm crap at ratings.
Word Count: 219
Pairing: Anyone BUT SmokerxAce
Topic: see 'Pairing' description above.




You almost miss it when that first drop of perspiration escapes and runs down the jut of collar bone, but you catch it with your tongue when it reaches his shoulder, and you find yourself biting against the dark inked patterns there which you find absurd, the way he is absurdity and challenge and all things which are want in this world.

He does not belong to you, no more than you belong to him, and that is as close to perfection as this night is ever meant to be. You take it for what it is, you take it with greedy fingers which pull and dig and push against and into that hidden wanton ring of muscle that arches his back and opens him up.

His hair is a tangled mess, curling against flush and freckles that may have seemed to you endearing and boyish if you weren’t fucking him slow and angry, if your fingernails weren’t drawing beads of blood along the vulnerable inside of parted thighs.

In the morning, you will never speak about this, and all things will move forward. For now, his moans and pants and the painful dig of his heel into the dip of your lower back are pockets of time, full of pause and promise, but pass on just the same.

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[info]dustyjack

July 14 2005, 21:28:54 UTC 6 years ago

You, my friend, fucking win.

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:09:00 UTC 6 years ago

I am extraordinarily happy that you liked it!

[info]ghostkotsuzaka

July 14 2005, 22:17:12 UTC 6 years ago

That was really good. sicne theres no pair u can think about anyone. I like =3

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:10:11 UTC 6 years ago

Everyone deserves a shot at Ace. Ok, maybe not 'deserves', as much as 'wants'.

[info]fenm

July 14 2005, 22:31:05 UTC 6 years ago

That was yummy. ^_^
And, aw, what a cute icon!
I'm going on a trip the weekend after next, so I'll be reading HP&tHBP on the plane. ^_^

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:13:03 UTC 6 years ago

That icon came from a community called 'potterpuffs' Sooooo much cuteness there!

[info]mei_yanohi

July 14 2005, 23:16:02 UTC 6 years ago

............... ::gapes::

That's like.... kfdjvbnkjwd... that's just... the most beautiful thing I've heard on this comm in weeks. Holy shit, woman. GodDAMN. Augh where have you been all my life.

And I was gonna make a big fancy comeback. Steal the glory will ya rassenfrassen....

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:14:27 UTC 6 years ago

I've been in New Joisy.

And PLEASE make your fancy come back! I've been looking forward to it!!!!! ^_^

[info]kichara

July 14 2005, 23:31:57 UTC 6 years ago

You=Winner. <3

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:14:52 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you!!!

[info]bamf_girl

July 15 2005, 00:05:50 UTC 6 years ago

....wow. o.o Talk about boner-inducing...

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:15:38 UTC 6 years ago

Boners make me happy.

[info]jadeprince

July 15 2005, 03:15:35 UTC 6 years ago

F-f-f-fuuck. o___o You totally win. GAH. Just GAH. A PERFECT response to this topic. UTTER GENIUS.

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:18:09 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks!

IMHO, If Ace doesn't belong to Smoker, then Ace belongs to everyone else.

[info]jadeprince

July 15 2005, 18:25:28 UTC 6 years ago

Damn straight. *nods*

[info]dethorats

July 15 2005, 04:57:14 UTC 6 years ago

Mmmmm. That was HOT! And totally delicious. Especially luv the third paragraph.

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:19:06 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you!! ^_^

[info]kyrakitty

July 15 2005, 12:31:29 UTC 6 years ago

I am speechless.

This is the first time I've seen second person perspective work. And boy did it. Holy crap dance.

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 15:21:29 UTC 6 years ago

Originally, this was not meant to be in second person perspective, since I don't like it either. But, it just sort of developed that way, and I'm happy that it seems effective!

[info]sherriaisling

July 15 2005, 18:05:43 UTC 6 years ago

For now, his moans and pants and the painful dig of his heel into the dip of your lower back are pockets of time, full of pause and promise, but pass on just the same. You continually amaze me with your ability to blow my mind more and more each time you write.

And icon love.

[info]sherrymarie

July 15 2005, 18:23:13 UTC 6 years ago

Ah, thank you ever so much!

And my icon loves you, as well. It told me so.

[info]lady_karasu

July 17 2005, 18:41:33 UTC 6 years ago

Mmmm, nice work- nice look on the topic, too. Hawt~ XD

[info]sherrymarie

July 18 2005, 11:24:31 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you!
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